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UC PIQ 5 · Challenge · Draft 1

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Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?

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Keepa junior named Priya showed me how she set up the ratios in a table — The table shows exactly how you learned from Priya.

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2 met · 3 to strengthen · 1 not assessed

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